Comments on: Improving your Product Descriptions

By: forex robot

forex robot — Wed, 31 Mar 2010 04:30:17 +0000

Great site. A lot of useful information here. I�m sending it to some friends!

By: Amanda Avutu

Amanda Avutu — Thu, 25 Mar 2010 00:21:04 +0000

Psst, Tammy, I’m with you on the thistles. . .but it’s the post above this one where your praise and preferences really count. Good luck!

Thanks, Danette. Hey, my brain is your brain. Your copy ain’t too shabby, by the way!

Catherine, I have absolutely no doubt that your customers treasure the stories you include with your art.

By: Tammy

Tammy — Wed, 24 Mar 2010 17:24:58 +0000

I’d pick the first one. No, wait! I’d pick the tree with the initials. On second thougt… I like the thistles (I think they’re thistles) anyway let’s just say I’d be happy, Happy, HAPPY with any of them ~ they’re all beautiful!

By: Indre

Indre — Wed, 24 Mar 2010 06:12:43 +0000

If all were that simple. Yoox.com has basically nothing can be called a proper product description, though their sales are high.
For my items I try to be creative and describe even the smallest detail of my items, but like you say, the traffic does not convert into customers.
I think that there’s much more to think of than just title and description. Too bad I don’t know that it is :(

By: Danette Yepsen

Danette Yepsen — Tue, 23 Mar 2010 14:42:55 +0000

such great advice! i write all of my own copy for my handmade store, sweet papier, a charming little paper bakery {www.sweetpapier.com}, and so appreciate experts who are willing to share their knowledge on topics such as this ~ thank you, Amanda.

By: Bumpkin Bears

Bumpkin Bears — Tue, 23 Mar 2010 12:18:16 +0000

Thanks so much for all these articles, they are being a great help. I always like to write very short little stories to go with the storybook like art that I draw. I always hope this brings a little magic to them. I will go back and check that they include the customer, both the adult and child!
Catherine x